ਜਸਵੰਤ ਜ਼ਫਰ: ਕੁੱਖਾਂ ‘ਚ ਕਤਲ ਹੁੰਦੀਆਂ ਕੁੜੀਆਂ

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11 responses to “ਜਸਵੰਤ ਜ਼ਫਰ: ਕੁੱਖਾਂ ‘ਚ ਕਤਲ ਹੁੰਦੀਆਂ ਕੁੜੀਆਂ”

1. 

   Jaswant Zafar

   November 12, 2013

   Dhanvad mittro, utshah vadaun laii

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2. 

   Gurinderjit Singh

   November 12, 2013

   Sure he does! Perhaps my point was not properly comprehended or not understod :)! It is in line with Zafar's thoughts too!

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3. 

   Pf. HS Dimple

   November 12, 2013

   Zafar saheh deseve a pat on the back for such a nice poem, and he should keep it up…….thanks, sir!

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4. 

   Gurinderjit Singh

   November 12, 2013

   Bhai Sahib!
   ਨਾ ਰੋਕੋ ਕਵੀਆਂ ਨੂੰ ..
   ਮਸਲਿਆਂ ਦੇ ਮਸਾਲਿਆਂ ਨਾਲ਼ ਤਾਂ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਪੱਕਦੀ ਹੈ..
   ਆਪਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਤਾਂ ਵਿਸ਼ਾ ਚਾਹੀਦੈ.. ਵਧੀਆ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਲਿਖਣ ਦਾ.. ਸਨਮਾਨ ਹਾਸਲ ਕਰਨ 'ਚ ਵੀ ਫਾਇਦਾ ਹੋ ਜਾਂਦਾ.. ਵਾਹ ਵਾਹ ਵੀ ਚੋਖੀ ਹੋ ਜਾਂਦੀ ਐ… ਜੰਮਣ-ਮਰਨਾ ਤਾਂ ਚਲਦਾ ਈ ਰਹਿਣੈ!!

   Anyways, please take a look at the following:
   http://gurinderjit.blogspot.com/2008/07/blog-post_28.html

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5. 

   Rama Rattan

   November 12, 2013

   Jafar ji
   Adab
   You have written a wonderful poem addressing to our patrarichal society.
   It is true in this society where every moment is an abuse for a women who will like to live in it ?
   No mother wants to live her abusive life again through her daughter,
   I always appreciate your poetry.
   May your pen be more powerful.
   Rama Rattan

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6. 

   Pf. HS Dimple

   November 12, 2013

   I shall call upon the poets to pen such poems which are unconventional and really pierce ur heart and 'make' an impact on u……

   like kukhan ch qatal hundiian kudian,,,,,,,,,,

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7. 

   Pf. HS Dimple

   November 12, 2013

   Zafar saheb,

   ur each of the poems is nice, and recently a student of mine read ur poem about patriotism and i would like to get this poem and plz send it to me at sohnanaam@gmail.com, if u have this as soft copy

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8. 

   Pf. HS Dimple

   November 12, 2013

   I have read this poem twice and it is one of the poems which have really impresed me a lot and it is nice and about inderjit nandan, whose comment I read has scribbled a great epic on Shaheed Bhagat Singh and she also deserves a pat on her back for this nice task….

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9. 

   inderjit nandan

   November 12, 2013

   ਬਹੁਤ ਸੁੰਦਰ!ਕਮਾਲ ਦੀ ਰਚਨਾ!!

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10. 

    inderjit nandan

    November 12, 2013

    ਬਹੁਤ ਸੁੰਦਰ!ਕਮਾਲ ਦੀ ਰਚਨਾ!!

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11. 

    gurmeetbrar.blogspot.com

    November 12, 2013

    Zafar!
    Really a thought provoking poem.I think this was recited by you on the occasion of Ram Singh Chahal Memorial poetry eve also.
    Gurmeet Brar

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